当中不需要冠词，例如：应写retrainedstaff而不是retrainedthestaff
3.助动词：简历当中不需要助动词，所以，应该写managed而不是havemanaged
4.动词：简历当中的所有主要动词全部用动词的过去式形式。
5.being性动词：简历中一律使用主动语态，不要出现am,is,are,were,was等词。
6.时态转换：简历中的时态基本保持过去式，偶尔用一般现在式。
7.复合句：在简历中少用复合句，将其拆成若干短小的句子，最多带一个从句，主句都是类似祈使句的样子—无主语
self-statement（个人介绍----样本）
mybackground
iwasborninasmallvillageofshandongprovinceonapril4th,1968.wheniwasyoung,myfamilywasverypoor,soihadtoworktoearnmoneytohelpmyparentsafterclasswheniwasinthemiddleschool.
in1986iwasadmittedbyuniversityofinternationalbusinessandeconomics(or:uibe)topursueabachelordegreeineconomics.mymajorisaccountingindepartmentofinternationalbusinessmanagement.theundergraduateeducationgavemeawiderangeofvisionandtaughtmehowtocooperatewithothers.idevelopedseveralprofessionalinterestsinaccounting,finance,andinternationaltrade.
thefollowingeight-yearworkingexperienceofferedmeagoodchancetogivefullplaytomycreativity,intelligenceanddiligence.in1990-1993,iworkedasanassistanttofundingmanagerinchinanationaltechnicalimportandexportcorporation.in1993-present,iwasemployedbychinakingdomimportandexportcorporationtobethemangeroffinancialandaccountingdivision.
idobelievethatwithmyhardearlylife,solideducationalbackgroundandampleworkingexperience,iwouldbeanexcellentstudentofyoumbaprogram.
mypersonalaccomplishment:
aftergraduatingfromuibe,iwasemployedastheassistanttothefundingmanagerbychinanationaltechnicalimportandexportcorporation.afterreadingalotofrelatedfiles,andanalyzingtheoverallfundingsituationofthecorporation,ifoundthattheloanpolicywasnotbeenputintoeffect.sowehavethousandsofmillionsrmbloanwithveryhighinterestratewhilealargeamountofcashinbankwithverylowinterestratewasidle.ireportedthistomysupervisor,andthenwestudiedandrevisedtheloanpolicy.thisrevisionsavedthecorporationapproximatelyrmbthirtymillionsyuan.inordertoraisethefundingeffectiveness,afteroneyear’shardwork,idevelopedtheinternalbankingsystemwithinthecorporationbasedontheactualfundingsupplyandneedofthedifferentdivisionsandprojects.thisinternalbankingsyste
mmadefulluseofthecorporation’fundingresources,andduetothis,iwashighlypraisedbythepresidentofthecorporation.
whychooseyourmbaprogram?
afterihaveworkedinbusinessareaforeightyears,ifeelthatineedtocontinuemyeducationbypursuingamasterdegreeinbusinessadministration.ihavepracticedmyprofessionalexpertiseinaccounting,demonstratedmyleadershipabilitiesandperfectedmycommunicationskills.butihaveyettobecomeanentrepreneurinmyownright,andtofullymastertheartofmodernbusiness.iwanttobetrainedmorevigorouslyinscientificmethodsofanalysisandsynthesis.therearealotofopportunitiesandchallengesinchinathatidonotyetfellfullyconfidenttoseize.mybusinesscareerhassofarbenefitedmostlythecompaniesthatiworkedfor,butagoodbusinesseducationinyouruniversitywillprobablybecomeaneweraforme.
youruniversityiswellknownforitsexcellenceinchina’sbusinesseducation.iamsurethat,wi上一页 [1] [2] [3] 下一页
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